What this trains
Strong writers are usually strong readers of writing. They can see whether a paragraph is clear, convincing and well developed.
This task helps you move beyond “good” or “bad” and towards precise diagnosis.
Task 3
Learn to judge whether a paragraph really works
A paragraph can look complete on the surface and still remain weak in important places. Here, you train your eye for quality, precision and internal logic.
Focus point
Do not only ask whether the paragraph has the right parts. Ask whether those parts really do their job.
Good strategy
Look for movement: point → support → explanation → example → conclusion. Then decide how well each step actually works.
Your task
Read each paragraph carefully. Then decide which statements really apply.
Level 1
Start with a paragraph whose weaknesses are still quite visible.
Paragraph
Social media is very important today and many people use it every day. Studies show that teenagers spend a lot of time online. This can have different effects on people. There are many examples of this in everyday life. In conclusion, social media has an influence on society.
Which statements apply?
Level 2
This paragraph looks stronger, but several parts still do not really work.
Paragraph
One important reason to regulate social media is its influence on young users. Studies show that many teenagers spend several hours a day on these platforms. This shows that social media is important. For example, many people use Instagram and TikTok. Overall, social media should be regulated more strictly.
Which statements apply?
Level 3
This paragraph is fairly strong. Look closely and decide which statements still hold.
Paragraph
One important reason to regulate social media more strictly is its impact on young users. According to recent studies, teenagers spend several hours a day on these platforms. This suggests that social media plays a central role in shaping their behaviour. For example, unrealistic body ideals can create pressure and insecurity. Overall, stricter regulation could therefore help protect young users.
Which statements apply?
Helpful reminder
A paragraph is not strong just because it has five parts. It becomes strong when those parts are precise, connected and convincing.